Hi Niles, curious where did you get those tags from?
I would recommend starting with Klaviyo’s pre-built Abandoned Cart flow template and then modifying the email as you wish (see image example below)
I think it’ll be easier that way than trying to create it from scratch. It looks like the tags you are using are not tags Klaviyo would recognize. For you own name, you wouldn’t need to use a tag, you can just put Niles.